The Mimic

Detective Nathan Cross stood in the alley, his boots sinking slightly into the slick pavement, the night air thick with fog. The mist wrapped around the streetlights like a veil, casting a dim, ghostly glow over the scene. He’d been here before.

A woman’s body lay on the ground, positioned carefully, almost lovingly. Her eyes stared wide at the sky, and the blood pooled around her, reflecting the faint light in a dark, viscous circle. Cross had seen too many bodies in his career, but this one felt different. This one was a message. It was a sensation he felt in his bones.

“She’s been here for hours,” Sam Reyes said, crouching beside the victim. She made an effort to speak steadily, but her voice wavered. Sam wasn’t new to crime scenes, but Cross could tellthis one had unsettled her. It unsettled him, too. “It’s the same method, Nathan… exactly the same.”

“Don’t say it,” he interrupted, his voice tight. He couldn’t hear it. Not now. Not again.

Sam looked up at him, her dark eyes searching his face. “You know it is. It’s him. The same… the same guy.” Her words fell into the silence between them, heavy and final.

Cross clenched his jaw. The words felt like ice inside his chest. “It’s not just a murder. It’s a game.”

The killer had returned. After all these years, he was back.

Setup & Character Introduction

Nathan Cross wasn’t a man who trusted easily. He’d learned that the hard way, back when he was a young detective, green and full of ambition. He had left his idealism in the streets of the city, where it had been torn apart by the brutal reality of crime. Now, he was all edges and scarshis mind constantly racing, his body a bit slower these days, but still capable of the chase.

The fog had always been his companion on these nights. And the ghoststhose lingered, too.

Sam Reyes was everything Cross wasn’t. She was eager, fresh out of the academy, hungry for the job. Her eyes still held that spark, the belief that maybe, just maybe, she could make a difference. Cross envied that. He wanted to hold onto something like that, but it had slipped through his fingers long ago.

She was still learning, still trying to put the pieces together, and Cross had no intention of showing her how grim the truth could be. Not yet.

“What do we do now?” Sam asked in a tight but confident-sounding voice.“Call forensics? We can’t just leave her here.”

Cross stood still, staring at the scene. He could almost hear the killer’s laugh, faint but taunting, as if the murderer were waiting for him to catch up. “We call it in. But don’t get too comfortable. This isn’t over.”

“Are you…?” Sam hesitated. “Are you okay? This is… hard.”

He nodded, though it didn’t feel like the truth. His thoughts were already running, faster than he could catch them. He knew what would come next. He could already hear the click of the killer’s next move.

Inciting Incident

Back at the precinct, Cross sat at his desk, the letter sitting before him like an uninvited guest. He picked it up slowly, his fingers trembling as he unfolded the page. Sam was beside him, her breath catching in her throat when she saw the message.

Detective Cross,
I’ve been waiting for you to notice. The game is far from over. I have a few more surprises left for you.
The next one will be on you.

Cross exhaled sharply, his breath fogging up the glass of his office. It wasn’t a shock, not really. But the sting still hit him like a slap in the face. The Mimic was back. After all this time.

“I knew he’d come back,” Cross muttered, his voice hoarse. “I just… I thought he’d let me be.”

Sam’s hand trembled as she took the letter from him. “This is… personal, Nathan. He’s toying with you.”

Cross rubbed his eyes, exhausted beyond belief. “Yeah. And I’m the only one who can stop him.”

The letter felt like a weight on his chest, pulling him deeper into a hole he’d been trying to escape for years.

Rising Tension & First Turning Point 

Cross’s life was a haze for the next few days. Case files stacked up on his desk, but he couldn’t bring himself to look at them. Every time he tried to focus, the image of the woman’s body would resurface in his mind. The Mimic was always ahead, always planning. And Cross had never felt more powerless.

Sam was relentless, pushing him to follow leads, to keep going. She had an energy that Cross no longer had. She’d throw out ideas, fire off theories, and though they didn’t always pan out, it was a breath of fresh air in the suffocating tension that seemed to have taken over the city.

Then, just when Cross thought he might crack under the pressure, they got another call.

“We’ve got another one,” Boyle barked, standing in the doorway of their office. “Same setup. Same victim profile. You two better get down here now.”

The blood drained from Cross’s face. The Mimic hadn’t even bothered to hide his message anymore. He was taunting themno, taunting Cross.

At the crime scene, they found the victim in a small, run-down apartment. The body was placed exactly the same as the lastright down to the bloodstain pattern, the angle of the body’s limbs, everything. But there was one new detail.

A photograph.

It was an old one, yellowed with age, tucked neatly inside the victim’s hand. Cross reached for it, his fingers hesitant. The picture was of himthough much younger, back when he still wore the badge with pride. He was standing beside his former partner, David Jenkins, a man who had vanished years ago, leaving no trace behind.

His stomach twisted.

“This can’t be happening,” Cross muttered, his eyes darting from the photo to Sam’s confused expression. “Jenkins… it’s him.”

“Wait,” Sam said, her voice rising. “David Jenkins? Your old partner?”

Cross nodded, his throat dry. “I thought he was gone. I thought he’d disappeared after… after the case went south. But this? This changes everything.”

Midpoint Twist 

The investigation took a darker turn after that. Cross couldn’t shake the image of Jenkins’s face from the photograph. He kept hearing the name, kept thinking of all the unanswered questions. He spent long hours in the archives, flipping through old files, piecing together the forgotten details of his past.

But the truth came crashing down one night as Cross examined the case again, the evidence feeling more like a ghost than a clue. He was staring at the old files when he found something that made his blood run cold.

Jenkins hadn’t just vanished. He’d been suspendedkicked off the force for corruption. Cross had buried the memory, tried to forget, but it was all there in black and white. And now, it seemed Jenkins was playing the long game, waiting for the perfect moment to strike.

The night they found the next clue, Cross’s worst fears were confirmed. Jenkins had been watching him the entire time.

“He’s not just a killer,” Cross said, voice low, eyes distant. “He’s a ghost from my past.”

Sam’s face turned pale. “You think he’s been… manipulating you this whole time?”

“I know it. He’s been pulling the strings. And I didn’t even notice.”

Escalation & Personal Stakes 

The game had escalated. The killer wasn’t just trying to destroy the victims; he was trying to destroy Cross. Every lead, every detail, seemed to drag him deeper into his own guilt. Jenkins was there at every turn, taunting him, revealing just how much he had truly failed.

Sam tried to keep him grounded. She would look at him, her eyes sharp with concern. “Nathan, you can’t keep doing this alone. You’re breaking apart.”

Cross’s hand clenched around the coffee cup, the heat doing nothing to steady him. “I have to. This is my fault. I let him slip through the cracks. Now he’s… now he’s making me pay for it.”

“I’m here, Nathan,” Sam said, her voice soft. “You don’t have to do this alone.”

But Cross couldn’t hear her. Not yet. He needed to face this on his own, or there would be nothing left of him.

Climax

It came to a head one night, in the quiet ruins of a long-abandoned building. Cross followed the twisted path left by Jenkins, each step leading him closer to the confrontation he had been dreading. Sam was beside him, but Cross barely noticed. The fog seemed to swallow them whole as they made their way through the damp halls.

And then they found him.

Jenkins stood in the centre of a makeshift crime scene, surrounded by photographs of Cross’s past failures. His grin was wild, manic, as if the years of waiting had finally come to an end.

“You always knew, didn’t you?” Jenkins sneered. “You knew the truth all along. But you never wanted to face it.”

“You’re nothing but a ghost,” Cross said, his voice breaking. “And I should’ve stopped you when I had the chance.”

Jenkins lunged, but Cross was ready. The fight was briefclumsy, brutalbut in the end, Cross stood victorious, his hands shaking as he looked down at the man who had once been his partner. The man who had wanted to destroy him.

Cross’s breath hitched as he realized the cost. He had won, but at what price?

Falling Action & Resolution

Back at the precinct, Cross stood staring at the old photograph of Jenkins, now a reminder of everything that had gone wrong. The case was closed, but the weight of it all still hung heavy on his chest.

Sam approached, standing beside him. Her voice was soft but firm. “You did it, Nathan.”

He nodded, but the satisfaction was hollow. “I didn’t do it alone.”

Sam smiled, though it was bittersweet. “You finally let go.”

Cross didn’t answer. Instead, he looked out at the city through the window, the lights flickering like distant stars. The ghosts were still there, lingering, but for the first time in years, he wasn’t haunted by them.

He was free. And yet… the scars remained.

Anas Ilyas
Latest posts by Anas Ilyas (see all)

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *